Screen Print Design Finale?

I made a good amount of changes, as you can see. Steven's suggestion to me was not included because I couldn't quite get it right. But either way I think it turned out okay. Yay? Nay?

Hopefully starting on this today.

PS - I listened to Green Bird (from Cowboy Bebop) on repeat for like an hour or so last night while finishing this.

Screen Print Design - In Progress

Currently working on 4 color screen print design. This is either complete or close to it. I'll post pics of when I actually get it screened. I am quite excited, because I've never really done this before.